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2fast4you
12-15-2009, 05:49 PM
Well first of all, Im not joining this site to "advertise" Im looking for constructive critisism.
So tell me, what do you think? And how can I improve?
Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D9uBplDg6qc (part 1)
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SMcCall64
12-17-2009, 03:35 PM
I watched the first two episodes. It's a good start, but I have one main suggestion: Try and edit the videos so that they have better beginning and ending points. Starting a video at the beginning and ending of a stage seems more natural than stretching it out for the entire eleven minutes and having a somewhat abrupt ending in the middle of a stage.